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Wish to fly, but built to fall by =ENwings:iconENwings:

Categories Traditional Art > Paintings > Fantasy

©2008-2010 =ENwings
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OMG I DID IT, lol and I'm still awake yay :XD: ... I duno if it turned out sooo great ... once again I was at a loss on what to place in the background soo I tried making it look kinda like a wall with cracks in it just to see if I could do it... lol and it turned out looking more like black trees ... :( oh well hope you like her.

I got really inspired last night lol. I was looking through *kyrn gallery and her work is amazing it just totally inspired me to draw something. The inspiration came at a perfect time too since I'm trying to stay up all night and go to bed at a decent time :XD: its how I get myself back to schedule. So anyway this project gave me something to do besides watch anime.... :XD: which by the way is getting really boring lol.

Oh and some more inspiration was this song, I was listing to pandora (like an online radio) and this song Beautiful by Sarah Brightman came on and wow It was the perfect song for this piece. So I bought the mp3 and put it on repeat or 4 hours ...I know I'm a looser.

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~dax86 Nov 13, 2008, 4:40:19 PM
increibles colores!!! me encanto! las diferentes tonalidades y sus mezclas... asombroso sumado al hecho de que el dibujo esta genial!

beautifull!!! sorry, now i don't speak english lol

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~KarrinGray Nov 13, 2008, 4:59:50 PM
Really beautiful use of color! I like that you left the upper part of the wall white-it draws the eye up. :heart:

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~Kyoto-Himura Nov 13, 2008, 6:28:30 PM
It's beautiful. <3

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*swimninja Nov 13, 2008, 10:21:08 PM
:wow: this is simply amazing :heart: deserving of :+fav:

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=Flynn-the-cat Nov 14, 2008, 1:31:47 PM
Really lovely - the colours work beautifully, and the contrast and balance between each part worksreally well. I LOVE the flowing shape of her, and the white panels and the top part of her dress...

I don't like: the eys (only in fullview XD They're not in the right place and are angled oddly; they don't look like they belong with the rest of the face (hair and mouth are fine)
The sleeve on the left - the awkward corner. It looks like it's actually standing on it's own and breaks the flow of the picture. If you were able to/wished to work on it more, I guess I'd either remove it or extend/add more trailing after that part.
The feather fringe and the dress fringe - nice conept and works well if one doesn't look too closely, but up close they're a bit too crude/finerlike and spoil it slightly (....mostly because the rest of the picture is so delicate).

Otherall, though, a really nice picture ^_^

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=Flynn-the-cat Nov 14, 2008, 1:33:25 PM
a bit too crude/fingerlike

Otherall, though - Overall

So many typos *sighs*

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=ENwings Nov 14, 2008, 2:04:55 PM
lol after reading "I don't like" and seeing the big paragraph I'm all noooooo I fail lol

I personally like the eyes, but you would be correct about them being angled oddly... I'm not familiar with the face angel and I noticed when I had colored them that they seemed a little off and I have no clue how I would fix it.. *sigh* the awkward corner ugg I know :( It looks like she has a huge elbow.... I guess I should have curved it like the other side... I will fix it but DA probably wont see that version ... :XD:

Thanks, really for the comment, I like comments that take apart my work cause I'm obviously no expert, so it really helps me looks at the piece again and work towards getting better. lol I'm glad you like the over all piece!! :heart:

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=ENwings Nov 14, 2008, 2:12:29 PM
thanks I'm glad you like her :heart: :nod:

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What do they have in-common? ...Men with silver hair :drool:
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